Sine_Fine_Belli@lemmy.world to pics@lemmy.world · 17 hours agoFound on the benches outside the White House, ca. Aug 2019lemmy.worldimagemessage-square53fedilinkarrow-up1503arrow-down113
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minus-squareLena@gregtech.eulinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up6·7 hours agoWhy is “and an attitude” and “and that nasty” crossed out?
minus-squareapftwb@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up4·4 hours agoI think it just doesn’t flow with the rest of the poem. We currently have a president with an attitude and its not great. Also “that nasty hospital food” tonally just don’t feel like it fits IMO.
minus-squareEh-I@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up10arrow-down1·7 hours agoI think it suggests that all black women have attitudes and all hospital food is nasty. And only one of those is true.
minus-squareprole@lemmy.blahaj.zonelinkfedilinkarrow-up3·edit-25 hours agoI thought maybe (given the date) that they thought about the “attitude” the current president displayed, and realized they didn’t want that anymore. Edit: Nevermind, it was written in 1992 apparently https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I_want_a_president
minus-squareLena@gregtech.eulinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up5·7 hours agoDoesnt it more so suggest people with bad teeth have an attitude?
minus-squareEh-I@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up7·6 hours agoWe can figure this out. We just need a white-board and markers, maybe some lab coats and stethoscopes!
minus-squareLena@gregtech.eulinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up5·5 hours agoPins and red string are also essential
Why is “and an attitude” and “and that nasty” crossed out?
I think it just doesn’t flow with the rest of the poem. We currently have a president with an attitude and its not great. Also “that nasty hospital food” tonally just don’t feel like it fits IMO.
I think it suggests that all black women have attitudes and all hospital food is nasty.
And only one of those is true.
I thought maybe (given the date) that they thought about the “attitude” the current president displayed, and realized they didn’t want that anymore.
Edit: Nevermind, it was written in 1992 apparently https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I_want_a_president
Doesnt it more so suggest people with bad teeth have an attitude?
We can figure this out. We just need a white-board and markers, maybe some lab coats and stethoscopes!
Pins and red string are also essential